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Re: [PATCH v2 0/4] Use singular "they" when appropriate

From
Ævar Arnfjörð Bjarmason <avarab@gmail.com>
Date
Jun 10, 2021, 22:58 UTC
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On Thu, Jun 10 2021, brian m. carlson wrote:
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> [[PGP Signed Part:Undecided]]
> On 2021-06-09 at 15:44:59, Ævar Arnfjörð Bjarmason wrote:
>> 
>> On Wed, Jun 09 2021, Derrick Stolee via GitGitGadget wrote:
>> 
>> > Updates in v2
>> > =============
>> >
>> >  * Some edits were removed because they were in contrib/ or
>> >    Documentation/howto/ and these are now listed as exclusions in the
>> >    message of Patch 4.
>> 
>> Thanks.
>> 
>> >  * Several recommendations to improve the edits in the documentation and
>> >    code comments were incorporated. Those who recommended these edits are
>> >    credited with "Helped-by" tags.
>> 
>> I think a v2 is a bit premature with all the active discussion on the v1
>> thread, a lot of which isn't addressed by the v2 or this CL, e.g. many
>> point I[1] and others raised.
>> 
>> My main objection of extending this to commit messages and thus making
>> e.g. non-native speakers be on their toes when contributing to the
>> project is gone, so that's good.
>> 
>> I'm still not in favor of this change because I think an active
>> recommendation like "Refer to an anonymous user in a gender neutral way"
>> probably isn't needed if we simply document that our preferred prose is
>> to avoid the issue entirely, which is the case in most of our
>> documentation.
>
> I agree that in many cases in technical writing that the passive voice
> (or another technique) may be preferable.  For example, this selection
> about O_TRUNC from open(2):
>
>   If  the  file already exists and is a regular file and the access mode
>   allows writing (i.e., is O_RDWR or O_WRONLY) it will be truncated to
>   length 0.  If the file is a FIFO or terminal device file, the O_TRUNC
>   flag is ignored.  Otherwise, the effect of O_TRUNC is unspecified.
>
> Who is truncating it?  Who is ignoring it?  Who is not specifying it?
> In all three cases, the specific actor is unimportant or irrelevant, and
> we're better off using the passive voice here than trying to enumerate
> the actor.

Exactly. The preferred prose in Git's documentation in this regard should be the same matter of fact prose found in C library, binutils etc. documentation.

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>> The below for-show patch[2] shows an alternate approach that I think is
>> a better direction than this series.
>> 
>> It shows how some of the s/he|she/they/g search-replacements you did
>> could IMO be better if we simply reduced the amount of prose, e.g. in
>> strbuf.h changing:
>> 
>>     passes a context pointer, which can be used by the programmer of the
>>     callback as she sees fit.
>> 
>> To:
>> 
>>     passes a `void *context` to the callback `fn`
>
> In many cases, saying less is better, I agree.  If we don't need to
> refer to a human being, then we don't need to consider any pronouns for
> that human being.  If we communicate things more simply with fewer
> words, then that's clearly better overall for everyone involved.
> Nobody's reading documentation for pleasure, after all.
>
> I do think that the recommendation that we refer to an anonymous user in
> a gender-neutral way still stands, though.  Sometimes we will need to
> refer to the user or another human actor and that will be the most
> natural way to express the idea, so we should use gender-neutral
> language to do so.
>
> So roughly here, I'm in favor of both approaches.
When do we need or even prefer to refer to a user like that?

I haven't seen an example in our documentation that's actually better off because we're talking about things as if two "people" we need to invent pronouns for are interacting.

Can anyone name one that'll stand up under scrutiny, i.e. once we can look at it and see if we couldn't phrase it better by avoiding the issue this series tries to address with a regex search-replacement?

The diffstat of this series is only:
 12 files changed, 22 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

I've looked at all of them and I can't see one that wouldn't be better if the relevant text was changed similarly to what I've suggested upthread.

That's why I don't think this proposal is useful. If we accept this series we're going to be left with an active recommendation for a pattern that's already almost nonexistent in our documentation.

Perhaps that's because we're doing it 98% right already and aren't using "he" or "she" but "they" or "their". The multiple ways you can use "they" or "their" in the English language makes that hard to grep for. A lot of our "they"'s are referring e.g. to a command-line option, or "their" referring to "their arguments", as in the argv vector of a program.

The skepticism about this being needed at all isn't an opinion I hold about software documentation in general, but about software in Git's problem space specifically.

Git isn't something like software to track medical records or tax filings where we can make a hard assumption that the software is dealing with data from people, and thus the software's documentation might regularly expect to need to discuss such an invented cast of characters.

We just have:
 * You: The "user" of the software. Maybe a human being, but that's
   usually no more assumed than the "user" of chmod(2) being a human
   being.
 * Other users, not people, but users in the UID/GID sense of the
   word. Describing system-local interactions that are really two
   operating system users interacting in terms of assuming that they map
   onto two people just adds confusion.
   Note how e.g. chmod(2) and other such documentation rightly avoids
   bringing people into the matter. At most it refers to "owner" or
   "another user" etc.
 * "Other users" on the network, e.g. you make a change, it conflicts
   with upstream. I think in all these cases saying something like:
       You can add data and commit it, then push it. Once you push it
       you might find another person has made changes on the same
       branch, he/she/it/they changed the same file as you, now you've
       got a conflict...
   Is worse than:
       When push your branch you might get a conflict with the remote's
       upstream branch, if merging it results in a conflict then...
   In such scenarios we're talking about e.g. our local state
   interacting with remote network state, those are ultimately commits
   or other data we have to deal with in some way.
   It's almost never important whether that data was made by a human or
   some automated system. Inventing a cast of characters just makes
   things more confusing.

I think the nearest we come to rightly discussing actual people in the context of git's documentation is things like commit envelope data (names, E-Mail addresses). Even those don't cleanly map to human beings, so our documentation probably shouldn't be implying that in its prose.

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  1. 0/4 Use singular "they" when appropriateDerrick Stolee via GitGitGadget, Jun 7, 2021
  2. 2/4 *: use singular they in commentsDerrick Stolee via GitGitGadget, Jun 7, 2021
  3. Ævar Arnfjörð BjarmasonJun 7, 2021
  4. Derrick StoleeJun 7, 2021
  5. Johannes SchindelinJun 10, 2021
  6. Junio C HamanoJun 7, 2021
  7. Felipe ContrerasJun 7, 2021
  8. Emily ShafferJun 8, 2021
  9. 1/4 Documentation: use singular they when appropriateDerrick Stolee via GitGitGadget, Jun 7, 2021
  10. Ævar Arnfjörð BjarmasonJun 7, 2021
  11. Derrick StoleeJun 7, 2021
  12. Andrei RybakJun 7, 2021
  13. Ævar Arnfjörð BjarmasonJun 7, 2021
  14. Johannes SchindelinJun 10, 2021
  15. Felipe ContrerasJun 10, 2021
  16. Felipe ContrerasJun 7, 2021
  17. Phillip SusiJun 9, 2021
  18. Felipe ContrerasJun 9, 2021
  19. Phillip SusiJun 11, 2021
  20. Felipe ContrerasJun 11, 2021
  21. Derrick StoleeJun 10, 2021
  22. Junio C HamanoJun 11, 2021
  23. Felipe ContrerasJun 11, 2021
  24. Phillip SusiJun 12, 2021
  25. Junio C HamanoJun 8, 2021
  26. Kerry, RichardJun 8, 2021
  27. Junio C HamanoJun 8, 2021
  28. Derrick StoleeJun 9, 2021
  29. Junio C HamanoJun 10, 2021
  30. Emily ShafferJun 8, 2021
  31. Felipe ContrerasJun 8, 2021
  32. Kerry, RichardJun 9, 2021
  33. Felipe ContrerasJun 9, 2021
  34. Kerry, RichardJun 25, 2021
  35. Junio C HamanoJun 9, 2021
  36. Johannes SchindelinJun 10, 2021
  37. Felipe ContrerasJun 10, 2021
  38. Robert KarszniewiczJun 14, 2021
  39. 4/4 CodingGuidelines: recommend singular theyDerrick Stolee via GitGitGadget, Jun 7, 2021
  40. Junio C HamanoJun 7, 2021
  41. Derrick StoleeJun 7, 2021
  42. Junio C HamanoJun 8, 2021
  43. brian m. carlsonJun 10, 2021
  44. Johannes SchindelinJun 10, 2021
  45. Ævar Arnfjörð BjarmasonJun 7, 2021
  46. Felipe ContrerasJun 8, 2021
  47. Felipe ContrerasJun 7, 2021
  48. Phillip SusiJun 9, 2021
  49. Felipe ContrerasJun 9, 2021
  50. Robert KarszniewiczJun 7, 2021
  51. Felipe ContrerasJun 7, 2021
  52. Jeff KingJun 8, 2021
  53. Felipe ContrerasJun 8, 2021
  54. Derrick StoleeJun 9, 2021
  55. Felipe ContrerasJun 9, 2021
  56. brian m. carlsonJun 10, 2021
  57. Felipe ContrerasJun 11, 2021
  58. Emily ShafferJun 8, 2021
  59. Junio C HamanoJun 9, 2021
  60. Derrick StoleeJun 9, 2021
  61. 3/4 *: fix typosDerrick Stolee via GitGitGadget, Jun 7, 2021
  62. Emily ShafferJun 8, 2021
  63. Johannes SchindelinJun 10, 2021
  64. Derrick StoleeJun 10, 2021
  65. Johannes SchindelinJun 11, 2021
  66. Felipe ContrerasJun 7, 2021
  67. 0/4 Use singular "they" when appropriateDerrick Stolee via GitGitGadget, Jun 9, 2021
  68. 4/4 CodingGuidelines: recommend singular theyDerrick Stolee via GitGitGadget, Jun 9, 2021
  69. Felipe ContrerasJun 9, 2021
  70. 3/4 *: fix typosDerrick Stolee via GitGitGadget, Jun 9, 2021
  71. 2/4 *: use singular they in commentsDerrick Stolee via GitGitGadget, Jun 9, 2021
  72. Felipe ContrerasJun 9, 2021
  73. 1/4 Documentation: use singular they when appropriateDerrick Stolee via GitGitGadget, Jun 9, 2021
  74. Felipe ContrerasJun 9, 2021
  75. Ævar Arnfjörð BjarmasonJun 9, 2021
  76. Felipe ContrerasJun 9, 2021
  77. Junio C HamanoJun 10, 2021
  78. Junio C HamanoJun 10, 2021
  79. Felipe ContrerasJun 10, 2021
  80. brian m. carlsonJun 10, 2021
  81. Ævar Arnfjörð BjarmasonJun 10, 2021
  82. Felipe ContrerasJun 11, 2021
  83. Derrick StoleeJun 11, 2021
  84. Felipe ContrerasJun 11, 2021
  85. Ævar Arnfjörð BjarmasonJun 13, 2021
  86. Junio C HamanoJun 15, 2021
  87. Derrick StoleeJun 15, 2021
  88. Felipe ContrerasJun 15, 2021
  89. Junio C HamanoJun 14, 2021
  90. 0/4 Avoid gendered pronounsDerrick Stolee via GitGitGadget, Jun 15, 2021
  91. 2/4 comments: avoid using the gender of our usersFelipe Contreras via GitGitGadget, Jun 15, 2021
  92. 1/4 doc: avoid using the gender of other peopleFelipe Contreras via GitGitGadget, Jun 15, 2021
  93. 3/4 *: fix typosDerrick Stolee via GitGitGadget, Jun 15, 2021
  94. 4/4 CodingGuidelines: recommend singular theyDerrick Stolee via GitGitGadget, Jun 15, 2021
  95. Ævar Arnfjörð BjarmasonJun 15, 2021
  96. Felipe ContrerasJun 15, 2021
  97. Junio C HamanoJun 16, 2021
  98. Junio C HamanoJun 16, 2021
  99. Bagas SanjayaJun 16, 2021
  100. Derrick StoleeJun 16, 2021
  101. Ævar Arnfjörð BjarmasonJun 16, 2021
  102. Felipe ContrerasJun 16, 2021
  103. Junio C HamanoJun 17, 2021
  104. Derrick StoleeJun 17, 2021
  105. Felipe ContrerasJun 17, 2021
  106. Ævar Arnfjörð BjarmasonJun 17, 2021
  107. Felipe ContrerasJun 17, 2021
  108. brian m. carlsonJun 18, 2021
  109. Felipe ContrerasJun 18, 2021
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  111. Ævar Arnfjörð BjarmasonJun 17, 2021
  112. brian m. carlsonJun 18, 2021
  113. Ævar Arnfjörð BjarmasonJun 18, 2021
  114. Felipe ContrerasJun 18, 2021
  115. Junio C HamanoJun 19, 2021
  116. Junio C HamanoJun 28, 2021
  117. Felipe ContrerasJun 29, 2021
  118. Derrick StoleeJun 29, 2021
  119. Ævar Arnfjörð BjarmasonJun 29, 2021
  120. Felipe ContrerasJun 17, 2021
  121. Felipe ContrerasJun 17, 2021
  122. Felipe ContrerasJun 15, 2021
  123. Bagas SanjayaJun 12, 2021
  124. Phillip SusiJun 12, 2021

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