Re: [PATCH 06/11] MyFirstObjectWalk: update recommended usage
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Junio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com>
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- Mar 7, 2022, 16:47 UTC
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Derrick Stolee <derrickstolee@github.com> writes:
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> Definitely room for improvement here. I got hung up on the two uses of > "it" so here is another attempt: > > If its `filter` member is not `NULL`, then `filter` contains > information for how to filter the object list. > > What do you think?
Sure. I won't get hung up on three uses of filter here ;-)
The above reads well.
Thanks.