From: Junio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com>
Date: Mon, 07 Mar 2022 16:47:59 GMT
Subject: Re: [PATCH 06/11] MyFirstObjectWalk: update recommended usage
Message-ID: <xmqq7d95vhds.fsf@gitster.g>
In-Reply-To: <e163a286-37cb-2568-1d96-0c7b7fba4e5a@github.com>

Derrick Stolee <derrickstolee@github.com> writes:

> Definitely room for improvement here. I got hung up on the two uses of
> "it" so here is another attempt:
>
>  If its `filter` member is not `NULL`, then `filter` contains
>  information for how to filter the object list.
>
> What do you think?

Sure.  I won't get hung up on three uses of filter here ;-)

The above reads well.

Thanks.