Re: [RFC PATCHv3] repack: rewrite the shell script in C.
- From
Kyle J. McKay <mackyle@gmail.com>
- Date
- Aug 18, 2013, 15:41 UTC
- Message-ID
- <DC7C72E5-8B52-48B2-B10B-1095118865B1@gmail.com>
- In-Reply-To
- <1376836587-25248-1-git-send-email-stefanbeller@googlemail.com>
On Aug 18, 2013, at 07:36, Stefan Beller wrote:
Show 7 quoted lines
> + fprintf(stderr, > + "WARNING: Some packs in use have been renamed by\n" > + "WARNING: prefixing old- to their name, in order to\n" > + "WARNING: replace them with the new version of the\n" > + "WARNING: file. But the operation failed, and\n" > + "WARNING: attempt to rename them back to their\n" > + "WARNING: original names also failed.\n"
Bad grammar "But the operation failed, and attempt to rename them ...".
How about "But the operation failed, and the attempt to rename them ..." instead.