From: Kyle J. McKay <mackyle@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 18 Aug 2013 15:41:51 GMT
Subject: Re: [RFC PATCHv3] repack: rewrite the shell script in C.
Message-ID: <DC7C72E5-8B52-48B2-B10B-1095118865B1@gmail.com>
In-Reply-To: <1376836587-25248-1-git-send-email-stefanbeller@googlemail.com>

On Aug 18, 2013, at 07:36, Stefan Beller wrote:

> +			fprintf(stderr,
> +				"WARNING: Some packs in use have been renamed by\n"
> +				"WARNING: prefixing old- to their name, in order to\n"
> +				"WARNING: replace them with the new version of the\n"
> +				"WARNING: file.  But the operation failed, and\n"
> +				"WARNING: attempt to rename them back to their\n"
> +				"WARNING: original names also failed.\n"

Bad grammar "But the operation failed, and attempt to rename them ...".

How about "But the operation failed, and the attempt to rename  
them ..." instead.