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Re: [PATCH] wording fixes in the user manual and glossary

From
BABen Aveling <bena.001@optusnet.com.au>
Date
May 26, 2014, 08:11 UTC
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<5382F73F.2010704@optusnet.com.au>
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<5382F237.8070909@gmail.com>
On 25/05/14 20:37, Jeremiah Mahler wrote:
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>> How about this:
>>
>>    Eventually the upstream developer will do additional work in their
>>    repository.  Creating new commits and advancing the branches to point
>>    at the new commits.
>

The second sentence needs a verb. Maybe something along the lines of "When they ${do_X}, ${Y} will happen" ?

Regards, Ben
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Message 5 of 5 in “wording fixes in the user manual and glossary”
  1. wording fixes in the user manual and glossaryJeremiah Mahler, May 25, 2014
  2. Chris PackhamMay 25, 2014
  3. Jeremiah MahlerMay 25, 2014
  4. Chris PackhamMay 26, 2014
  5. Ben AvelingMay 26, 2014

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