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[PATCH] wording fixes in the user manual and glossary

From
Jeremiah Mahler <jmmahler@gmail.com>
Date
May 25, 2014, 03:50 UTC
Message-ID
<1400989841-2845-1-git-send-email-jmmahler@gmail.com>
Some minor wording fixes in the user manual and glossary.
Signed-off-by: Jeremiah Mahler <jmmahler@gmail.com>
---
 Documentation/glossary-content.txt | 2 +-
 Documentation/user-manual.txt      | 8 ++++----
 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
diff --git a/Documentation/glossary-content.txt b/Documentation/glossary-content.txt
index be0858c..4e0b971 100644
--- a/Documentation/glossary-content.txt
+++ b/Documentation/glossary-content.txt
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 [[def_alternate_object_database]]alternate object database::
 	Via the alternates mechanism, a <<def_repository,repository>>
 	can inherit part of its <<def_object_database,object database>>
-	from another object database, which is called "alternate".
+	from another object database, which is called an "alternate".
 
 [[def_bare_repository]]bare repository::
 	A bare repository is normally an appropriately
diff --git a/Documentation/user-manual.txt b/Documentation/user-manual.txt
index d33f884..efb3c97 100644
--- a/Documentation/user-manual.txt
+++ b/Documentation/user-manual.txt
@@ -416,7 +416,7 @@ REVISIONS" section of linkgit:gitrevisions[7].
 Updating a repository with git fetch
 ------------------------------------
 
-Eventually the developer cloned from will do additional work in her
+Eventually the developer will do additional work in her cloned
 repository, creating new commits and advancing the branches to point
 at the new commits.
 
@@ -1811,8 +1811,8 @@ manner.
 You can then import these into your mail client and send them by
 hand.  However, if you have a lot to send at once, you may prefer to
 use the linkgit:git-send-email[1] script to automate the process.
-Consult the mailing list for your project first to determine how they
-prefer such patches be handled.
+Consult the mailing list for your project first to determine
+their requirements for submitting patches.
 
 [[importing-patches]]
 Importing patches to a project
@@ -2255,7 +2255,7 @@ $ git checkout test && git merge speed-up-spinlocks
 It is unlikely that you would have any conflicts here ... but you might if you
 spent a while on this step and had also pulled new versions from upstream.
 
-Some time later when enough time has passed and testing done, you can pull the
+Sometime later when enough time has passed and testing done, you can pull the
 same branch into the `release` tree ready to go upstream.  This is where you
 see the value of keeping each patch (or patch series) in its own branch.  It
 means that the patches can be moved into the `release` tree in any order.
-- 
2.0.0.rc4.479.gd6c9c28
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