Re: [PATCH 3/8] Doc: Improve shallow depth wording
From: "Junio C Hamano" <gitster@pobox.com>
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> Philip Oakley <philipoakley@iee.org> writes:
>
>> Avoid confusion in compound sentence about the start of the commit
>> set
>> and the depth measure. Use two sentences.
>
> Dropping the first ',' after "positive depth" does not seem to make
> it any easier to read (I personally think it makes it a lot harder
> to read).
Accepted. My mistake - will correct.
> Splitting the tail-end of the sentence into a separate
> sentence does make it easier to read, though.
>