From: Philip Oakley <philipoakley@iee.org>
Date: Mon, 17 Sep 2012 21:56:11 GMT
Subject: Re: [PATCH 3/8] Doc: Improve shallow depth wording
Message-ID: <F4AAD7C9987D4985AAB6D3F5810ED6C3@PhilipOakley>
In-Reply-To: <7vlig9w6a7.fsf@alter.siamese.dyndns.org>

From: "Junio C Hamano" <gitster@pobox.com>
> Philip Oakley <philipoakley@iee.org> writes:
>
>> Avoid confusion in compound sentence about the start of the commit 
>> set
>> and the depth measure. Use two sentences.
>
> Dropping the first ',' after "positive depth" does not seem to make
> it any easier to read (I personally think it makes it a lot harder
> to read).

Accepted. My mistake - will correct.

>             Splitting the tail-end of the sentence into a separate
> sentence does make it easier to read, though.
>

Philip