Re: [PATCH 1/4] doc: add articles (grammar)
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Philip Oakley <philipoakley@iee.org>
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- Dec 10, 2016, 20:28 UTC
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From: "Kristoffer Haugsbakk" <kristoffer.haugsbakk@gmail.com> Sent: Friday, December 09, 2016 3:51 PM
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> Add definite and indefinite articles in three places where they were > missing. > > - Use "the" in front of a directory name > - Use "the" in front of "style of cooperation" > - Use an indefinite article in front of "CVS background" > > Signed-off-by: Kristoffer Haugsbakk <kristoffer.haugsbakk@gmail.com> > --- > Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt | 6 +++--- > 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt > b/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt > index 4546fa0d7..6c434aff3 100644 > --- a/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt > +++ b/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt > @@ -1368,7 +1368,7 @@ $ git repack > will do it for you. If you followed the tutorial examples, you > would have accumulated about 17 objects in `.git/objects/??/` > directories by now. 'git repack' tells you how many objects it > -packed, and stores the packed file in `.git/objects/pack` > +packed, and stores the packed file in the `.git/objects/pack` > directory. > > [NOTE] > @@ -1543,9 +1543,9 @@ like this: > Working with Others, Shared Repository Style > -------------------------------------------- > > -If you are coming from CVS background, the style of cooperation > +If you are coming from a CVS background, the style of cooperation > suggested in the previous section may be new to you. You do not > -have to worry. Git supports "shared public repository" style of > +have to worry. Git supports the "shared public repository" style of > cooperation you are probably more familiar with as well. > > See linkgit:gitcvs-migration[7] for the details. > -- > 2.11.0
This looks good to me. -- Philip (UK)