From: Philip Oakley <philipoakley@iee.org>
Date: Sat, 10 Dec 2016 20:28:35 GMT
Subject: Re: [PATCH 1/4] doc: add articles (grammar)
Message-ID: <88A192B34B3D4DDDA47628687AE458D3@PhilipOakley>
In-Reply-To: <20161209155112.2112-2-kristoffer.haugsbakk@gmail.com>

From: "Kristoffer Haugsbakk" <kristoffer.haugsbakk@gmail.com>
Sent: Friday, December 09, 2016 3:51 PM
> Add definite and indefinite articles in three places where they were
> missing.
>
> - Use "the" in front of a directory name
> - Use "the" in front of "style of cooperation"
> - Use an indefinite article in front of "CVS background"
>
> Signed-off-by: Kristoffer Haugsbakk <kristoffer.haugsbakk@gmail.com>
> ---
> Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt | 6 +++---
> 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt 
> b/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt
> index 4546fa0d7..6c434aff3 100644
> --- a/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt
> +++ b/Documentation/gitcore-tutorial.txt
> @@ -1368,7 +1368,7 @@ $ git repack
> will do it for you. If you followed the tutorial examples, you
> would have accumulated about 17 objects in `.git/objects/??/`
> directories by now. 'git repack' tells you how many objects it
> -packed, and stores the packed file in `.git/objects/pack`
> +packed, and stores the packed file in the `.git/objects/pack`
> directory.
>
> [NOTE]
> @@ -1543,9 +1543,9 @@ like this:
> Working with Others, Shared Repository Style
> --------------------------------------------
>
> -If you are coming from CVS background, the style of cooperation
> +If you are coming from a CVS background, the style of cooperation
> suggested in the previous section may be new to you. You do not
> -have to worry. Git supports "shared public repository" style of
> +have to worry. Git supports the "shared public repository" style of
> cooperation you are probably more familiar with as well.
>
> See linkgit:gitcvs-migration[7] for the details.
> -- 
> 2.11.0

This looks good to me.
--
Philip (UK)