Re: [PATCH] fix doc typos
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Jim Meyering <jim@meyering.net>
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- Jan 30, 2008, 20:56 UTC
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Miklos Vajna <vmiklos@frugalware.org> wrote:
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> On Tue, Jan 29, 2008 at 08:38:55PM +0100, Jim Meyering <jim@meyering.net> wrote: >> Here is an illustration, by Jon Loeliger. Both node B and C are >> -a commit parents of commit node A. Parent commits are ordered >> +commit parents of commit node A. Parent commits are ordered > > wouldn't this be "Both commit node B and C are parents of commit node A."?
That does sound better. While you're word-smithing, how about s/node B/nodes B/, too:
"Both commit nodes B and C are parents of commit node A."
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