From: Jim Meyering <jim@meyering.net>
Date: Wed, 30 Jan 2008 20:56:27 GMT
Subject: Re: [PATCH] fix doc typos
Message-ID: <87ir1brq10.fsf@rho.meyering.net>
In-Reply-To: <20080130204357.GC4475@genesis.frugalware.org>

Miklos Vajna <vmiklos@frugalware.org> wrote:
> On Tue, Jan 29, 2008 at 08:38:55PM +0100, Jim Meyering <jim@meyering.net> wrote:
>>  Here is an illustration, by Jon Loeliger.  Both node B and C are
>> -a commit parents of commit node A.  Parent commits are ordered
>> +commit parents of commit node A.  Parent commits are ordered
>
> wouldn't this be "Both commit node B and C are parents of commit node A."?

That does sound better.
While you're word-smithing, how about s/node B/nodes B/, too:

  "Both commit nodes B and C are parents of commit node A."

Send a patch.