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[PATCH 6/8] Doc/gitsubmodules: improve readability of certain lines

From
Kaartic Sivaraam <kaartic.sivaraam@gmail.com>
Date
Jan 6, 2018, 18:46 UTC
Message-ID
<20180106184614.20115-7-kaartic.sivaraam@gmail.com>
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<20180106184614.20115-1-kaartic.sivaraam@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: Kaartic Sivaraam <kaartic.sivaraam@gmail.com>
---
 Documentation/gitsubmodules.txt | 19 ++++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
diff --git a/Documentation/gitsubmodules.txt b/Documentation/gitsubmodules.txt
index 745a3838e..339fb73db 100644
--- a/Documentation/gitsubmodules.txt
+++ b/Documentation/gitsubmodules.txt
@@ -76,9 +76,10 @@ The configuration of submodules
 Submodule operations can be configured using the following mechanisms
 (from highest to lowest precedence):
 
- * The command line for those commands that support taking submodule
-   specifications. Most commands have a boolean flag '--recurse-submodules
-   whether to recurse into submodules. Examples are `ls-files` or `checkout`.
+ * The command line arguments of those commands that support taking submodule
+   specifications. Most commands have a boolean flag '--recurse-submodules'
+   which specify whether they should recurse into submodules. Examples are
+   `ls-files` or `checkout`.
    Some commands take enums, such as `fetch` and `push`, where you can
    specify how submodules are affected.
 
@@ -90,8 +91,8 @@ Submodule operations can be configured using the following mechanisms
 For example an effect from the submodule's `.gitignore` file
 would be observed when you run `git status --ignore-submodules=none` in
 the superproject. This collects information from the submodule's working
-directory by running `status` in the submodule, which does pay attention
-to its `.gitignore` file.
+directory by running `status` in the submodule while paying attention
+to the `.gitignore` file of the submodule.
 +
 The submodule's `$GIT_DIR/config` file would come into play when running
 `git push --recurse-submodules=check` in the superproject, as this would
@@ -107,13 +108,13 @@ If the submodule is not yet initialized, then the configuration
 inside the submodule does not exist yet, so configuration where to
 obtain the submodule from is configured here for example.
 
- * the `.gitmodules` file inside the superproject. Additionally to the
-   required mapping between submodule's name and path, a project usually
+ * The `.gitmodules` file inside the superproject. Additionally, if mapping
+   is required between a submodule's name and its path, a project usually
    uses this file to suggest defaults for the upstream collection
    of repositories.
 +
-This file mainly serves as the mapping between name and path in
-the superproject, such that the submodule's Git directory can be
+This file mainly serves as the mapping between the name and path of submodules
+in the superproject, such that the submodule's Git directory can be
 located.
 +
 If the submodule has never been initialized, this is the only place
-- 
2.16.0.rc0.223.g4a4ac8367
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  1. 0/8 Doc/submodules: a few updatesKaartic Sivaraam, Jan 6, 2018
  2. 1/8 Doc/gitsubmodules: split a sentence for better readabilityKaartic Sivaraam, Jan 6, 2018
  3. Eric SunshineJan 7, 2018
  4. Stefan BellerJan 8, 2018
  5. 2/8 Doc/gitsubmodules: clearly specify advantage of submoduleKaartic Sivaraam, Jan 6, 2018
  6. Stefan BellerJan 8, 2018
  7. Kaartic SivaraamJan 9, 2018
  8. 3/8 Doc/gitsubmodules: specify how submodules help in reduced sizeKaartic Sivaraam, Jan 6, 2018
  9. Eric SunshineJan 7, 2018
  10. Stefan BellerJan 8, 2018
  11. Kaartic SivaraamJan 9, 2018
  12. Stefan BellerJan 9, 2018
  13. Kaartic SivaraamJan 9, 2018
  14. 4/8 Doc/gitsubmodules: avoid abbreviationsKaartic Sivaraam, Jan 6, 2018
  15. Eric SunshineJan 7, 2018
  16. Stefan BellerJan 8, 2018
  17. Kaartic SivaraamJan 9, 2018
  18. Stefan BellerJan 9, 2018
  19. Kaartic SivaraamJan 9, 2018
  20. 5/8 Doc/gitsubmodules: use "Git directory" consistentlyKaartic Sivaraam, Jan 6, 2018
  21. Eric SunshineJan 7, 2018
  22. Stefan BellerJan 8, 2018
  23. 6/8 Doc/gitsubmodules: improve readability of certain linesKaartic Sivaraam, Jan 6, 2018
  24. Eric SunshineJan 7, 2018
  25. Stefan BellerJan 8, 2018
  26. Kaartic SivaraamJan 9, 2018
  27. Stefan BellerJan 9, 2018
  28. Kaartic SivaraamJan 9, 2018
  29. 7/8 Doc/git-submodule: improve readability and grammar of a sentenceKaartic Sivaraam, Jan 6, 2018
  30. Stefan BellerJan 8, 2018
  31. 8/8 Doc/git-submodule: correctly quote important wordsKaartic Sivaraam, Jan 6, 2018
  32. Stefan BellerJan 8, 2018
  33. Kaartic SivaraamJan 9, 2018
  34. Stefan BellerJan 9, 2018
  35. 0/2 Doc/submodules: a few updatesKaartic Sivaraam, Jan 10, 2018
  36. 1/2 Doc/gitsubmodules: make some changes to improve readability and syntaxKaartic Sivaraam, Jan 10, 2018
  37. Stefan BellerJan 10, 2018
  38. 2/2 Doc/git-submodule: improve readability and grammar of a sentenceKaartic Sivaraam, Jan 10, 2018
  39. 0/2 Doc/submodules: a few updatesKaartic Sivaraam, Jan 14, 2018
  40. 1/2 Doc/gitsubmodules: make some changes to improve readability and syntaxKaartic Sivaraam, Jan 14, 2018
  41. Stefan BellerJan 16, 2018
  42. 2/2 Doc/git-submodule: improve readability and grammar of a sentenceKaartic Sivaraam, Jan 14, 2018
  43. Junio C HamanoJan 16, 2018
  44. Kaartic SivaraamJan 17, 2018

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