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> From: Kristoffer Haugsbakk <code@khaugsbakk.name>
>
> Correct verb tense, add missing words, avoid double blank lines,
> and rephrase things that don’t read well to me like “Turn this linkage
> to relative paths”.
>
> Signed-off-by: Kristoffer Haugsbakk <code@khaugsbakk.name>
> ---
> Documentation/RelNotes/2.48.0.txt | 25 ++++++++++++-------------
> 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
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>
> diff --git a/Documentation/RelNotes/2.48.0.txt b/Documentation/RelNotes/2.48.0.txt
> index d62c62dc17a..eff93be37a2 100644
> --- a/Documentation/RelNotes/2.48.0.txt
> +++ b/Documentation/RelNotes/2.48.0.txt
> @@ -47,15 +47,15 @@ Performance, Internal Implementation, Development Support etc.
>
> * The way AsciiDoc is used for SYNOPSIS part of the manual pages has
> been revamped. The sources, at least for the simple cases, got
> - vastly pleasant to work with.
> + vastly more pleasant to work with.
>
> * The reftable library is now prepared to expect that the memory
> allocation function given to it may fail to allocate and to deal
> with such an error.
>
> * An extra worktree attached to a repository points at each other to
> - allow finding the repository from the worktree and vice versa
> - possible. Turn this linkage to relative paths.
> + allow finding the repository from the worktree (and vice versa)
> + possible. Use relative paths for this linkage.
>
> * Enable Windows-based CI in GitLab.
>
> @@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ Performance, Internal Implementation, Development Support etc.
> * Update the project's CodingGuidelines to discourage naming functions
> with a "_1()" suffix.
>
> - * Updates the '.clang-format' to match project conventions.
> + * Update '.clang-format' to match project conventions.
>
> * Centralize documentation for repository extensions into a single place.
>
> @@ -116,7 +116,7 @@ Performance, Internal Implementation, Development Support etc.
> * The migration procedure between two ref backends has been optimized.
>
> * "git fsck" learned to issue warnings on "curiously formatted" ref
> - contents that have always been taken valid but something Git
> + contents that have always been treated as valid but that Git
> wouldn't have written itself (e.g., missing terminating end-of-line
> after the full object name).
>
> @@ -127,13 +127,13 @@ Performance, Internal Implementation, Development Support etc.
>
> * Drop support for ancient environments in various CI jobs.
>
> - * Isolates the reftable subsystem from the rest of Git's codebase by
> + * Isolate the reftable subsystem from the rest of Git's codebase by
> using fewer pieces of Git's infrastructure.
>
> * Optimize reading random references out of the reftable backend by
> allowing reuse of iterator objects.
>
> - * Backport oss-fuzz tests for us to our codebase.
> + * Backport oss-fuzz tests to our codebase.
>
> * Introduce a new repository extension to prevent older Git versions
> from mis-interpreting worktrees created with relative paths.
> @@ -173,13 +173,13 @@ Fixes since v2.47
> -----------------
>
> * Doc update to clarify how periodical maintenance are scheduled,
> - spread across time to avoid thundering hurds.
> + spread across time to avoid thundering herds.
>
> * Use after free and double freeing at the end in "git log -L... -p"
> had been identified and fixed.
>
> * On macOS, fsmonitor can fall into a race condition that results in
> - a client waiting forever to be notified for an event that have
> + a client waiting forever to be notified about an event that has
> already happened. This problem has been corrected.
>
> * "git maintenance start" crashed due to an uninitialized variable
> @@ -203,7 +203,7 @@ Fixes since v2.47
> * The dumb-http code regressed when the result of re-indexing a pack
> yielded an *.idx file that differs in content from the *.idx file
> it downloaded from the remote. This has been corrected by no longer
> - relying on: the *.idx file we got from the remote.
> + relying on the *.idx file we got from the remote.
>
> * When called with '--left-right' and '--use-bitmap-index', 'rev-list'
> will produce output without any left/right markers, which has been
> @@ -227,7 +227,7 @@ Fixes since v2.47
> * "git gc" discards any objects that are outside promisor packs that
> are referred to by an object in a promisor pack, and we do not
> refetch them from the promisor at runtime, resulting an unusable
> - repository. Work it around by including these objects in the
> + repository. Work around it by including these objects in the
> referring promisor pack at the receiving end of the fetch.
>
> * Avoid build/test breakage on a system without working malloc debug
> @@ -282,9 +282,8 @@ Fixes since v2.47
> on the path, which was not documented, which has been corrected.
> (merge bc1a980759 kk/doc-ancestry-path later to maint).
>
> -
> * "git tag" has been taught to refuse to create refs/tags/HEAD
> - as such a tag will be confusing in the context of UI provided by
> + since such a tag will be confusing in the context of the UI provided by
> the Git Porcelain commands.
> (merge bbd445d5ef jc/forbid-head-as-tagname later to maint).
>
>
> base-commit: b74ff38af58464688b211140b90ec90598d340c6