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Re: [PATCH 5/5] RelNotes: wordsmithing

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Junio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com>
Date
Apr 23, 2015, 15:38 UTC
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Michael Haggerty <mhagger@alum.mit.edu> writes:
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> On 04/23/2015 02:27 PM, Michael Haggerty wrote:
>> Make many textual tweaks to the 2.4.0 release notes.
>> 
>> Signed-off-by: Michael Haggerty <mhagger@alum.mit.edu>
>> ---
>>  Documentation/RelNotes/2.4.0.txt | 336 ++++++++++++++++++++-------------------
>>  1 file changed, 172 insertions(+), 164 deletions(-)
>> 
>> diff --git a/Documentation/RelNotes/2.4.0.txt b/Documentation/RelNotes/2.4.0.txt
>> index 7b23ca3..cde64be 100644
>> --- a/Documentation/RelNotes/2.4.0.txt
>> +++ b/Documentation/RelNotes/2.4.0.txt
>> [...]
>
> Oh, I just noticed that many of the same blurbs appear in the release
> notes for the maintenance versions. Once there is agreement on how many
> of the changes to accept, the analogous changes should probably be made
> in those other files.
Thanks.
FYI, these days the same text appears in
 (1) the topic description in "What's cooking";
 (2) the merge commit for the topic when it is merged to 'next';
 (3) the merge commit for the topic when it is merged to 'master';
 (4) Release notes for the 'master' and 'maint', when it is merged.

So the best time to catch mistakes and to rephrase it is when you see something questionable in "What's cooking", ideally before it hits 'next', before it hits 'master'.

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Message 11 of 11 in “Tweak the 2.4.0 release notes and related docs”
  1. 0/5 Tweak the 2.4.0 release notes and related docsMichael Haggerty, Apr 23, 2015
  2. 1/5 status: document the -v/--verbose optionMichael Haggerty, Apr 23, 2015
  3. Junio C HamanoApr 23, 2015
  4. 2/5 git tag: mention versionsort.prereleaseSuffix in manpageMichael Haggerty, Apr 23, 2015
  5. Junio C HamanoApr 23, 2015
  6. 3/5 RelNotes: correct name of versionsort.prereleaseSuffixMichael Haggerty, Apr 23, 2015
  7. Junio C HamanoApr 23, 2015
  8. 4/5 RelNotes: refer to the rebase -i "todo list", not "insn sheet"Michael Haggerty, Apr 23, 2015
  9. 5/5 RelNotes: wordsmithingMichael Haggerty, Apr 23, 2015
  10. Michael HaggertyApr 23, 2015
  11. Junio C HamanoApr 23, 2015

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