Re: [PATCH v3 01/16] doc: pull: explain what is a fast-forward
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Felipe Contreras <felipe.contreras@gmail.com>
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- Dec 8, 2020, 18:55 UTC
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On Tue, Dec 8, 2020 at 8:37 AM Felipe Contreras <felipe.contreras@gmail.com> wrote:
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> Take for example the word "calibration". It is a noun, but you can't > point to any calibration thing. It comes from the verb calibrating, > and such conversions are called nominalizations. > > I'm currently re-reading The Sense of Style, and it's interesting that > in Chapter 2 Steven Pinker mentions precisely these nouns, which he > calls "zombie nouns". They certainly do exist, and people use them, > but they suck the lifeblood out of prose. Take for example > "comprehension checks were used as exclusion criteria" (zombie nouns), > compared to "we excluded people who failed to understand the > instructions" (live verbs).
Actually I found this video, which is more digestible and enjoyable:
Zombie Nouns and the Passive Voice in Writing https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sS-Txm3R3v8
-- Felipe Contreras