Re: [PATCH] Documentation: Use 'First Paragraph' instead of 'First Line'.
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Junio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com>
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- Sep 13, 2012, 21:30 UTC
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Jeremy White <jwhite@codeweavers.com> writes:
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>>> I did not substantially alter this. The emphasis of this section >>> is on the broader show-branch output, and belaboring the subject would >>> be distracting and unnecessary imho. >> >> Yeah, but if that is the focus of this part of the documentation, >> wouldn't a patch to update "the first line" with something more >> generic like "title of the commit" be more appropriate? > > See my patch; I went with 'first part'. That, I think, does not > mislead (the goal of my change), but also does not distract from > the main point of the section (detailing the various bits of > git show-branch).
For that kind of casual wording, we have used "title" on this list for quite a long time, I think. So I'd rather see a change that just says "title" (if we are making such a change to the documentation, that is). This is not a very strong preference, though.