Re: [PATCH] Documentation: Grammar correction, wording fixes and cleanup

> On Mon, 2011-08-22 at 20:48 -0400, Ben Walton wrote:
>
>> +. You could be using the `objects/info/alternates` or
>> +`$GIT_ALTERNATE_OBJECT_DIRECTORIES` mechanisms to 'borrow'
>>  objects from other object stores.  A repository with this kind
>>  of incomplete object store is not suitable to be published for
>> -use with dumb transports but otherwise is OK as long as
>> -`objects/info/alternates` points at the right object stores
>> -it borrows from.
>> +use with dumb transports but is otherwise OK as long as
>> +`objects/info/alternates` points to object stores containing the
>> +missing objects.
>
> Umm, I'm not prepared to call this an improvement. The objects aren't
> _missing_, they just aren't present in the most immediate object store.
> I'm a minimalist when it comes to this sort of edit and would have just
> excised the word "right" from the awkward segment.