[PATCH 2/6] user-manual: minor editing for conciseness
From: J. Bruce Fields <bfields@puzzle.fieldses.org>
Just cutting out a few unnecessary words.
Signed-off-by: J. Bruce Fields <bfields@citi.umich.edu>
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Documentation/user-manual.txt | 10 +++-------
1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)
diff --git a/Documentation/user-manual.txt b/Documentation/user-manual.txt
index 0331bad..933177a 100644
--- a/Documentation/user-manual.txt
+++ b/Documentation/user-manual.txt
@@ -42,10 +42,9 @@ How to get a git repository
It will be useful to have a git repository to experiment with as you
read this manual.
-The best way to get one is by using the gitlink:git-clone[1] command
-to download a copy of an existing repository for a project that you
-are interested in. If you don't already have a project in mind, here
-are some interesting examples:
+The best way to get one is by using the gitlink:git-clone[1] command to
+download a copy of an existing repository. If you don't already have a
+project in mind, here are some interesting examples:
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# git itself (approx. 10MB download):
@@ -63,9 +62,6 @@ directory, you will see that it contains a copy of the project files,
together with a special top-level directory named ".git", which
contains all the information about the history of the project.
-In most of the following, examples will be taken from one of the two
-repositories above.
-
[[how-to-check-out]]
How to check out a different version of a project
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