Re: [PATCH] Change "remote tracking" to "remote-tracking"

> Jonathan Nieder <jrnieder@gmail.com> writes:
> 
> > Michael Schubert wrote:
> >
> >> --- a/Documentation/git-p4.txt
> >> +++ b/Documentation/git-p4.txt
> >> @@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ subsequent 'sync' operations.
> >>  	Import changes into given branch.  If the branch starts with
> >>  	'refs/', it will be used as is.  Otherwise if it does not start
> >>  	with 'p4/', that prefix is added.  The branch is assumed to
> >> -	name a remote tracking, but this can be modified using
> >> +	name a remote-tracking, but this can be modified using
> >>  	'--import-local', or by giving a full ref name.  The default
> >>  	branch is 'master'.
> >
> > This is confusing both before and after the patch.  What is "a remote
> > tracking"?
> >
> > Perhaps:
> >
> > 	--branch <ref>::
> > 		Import changes into <ref> instead of refs/remotes/p4/master.
> > 		If <ref> starts with refs/, it is used as is.  Otherwise, if
> > 		it does not start with p4/, that prefix is added.
> > 	+
> > 	By default a <ref> not starting with refs/ is treated as the
> > 	name of a remote-tracking branch (under refs/remotes/).  This
> > 	behavior can be modified using the --import-local option.
> > 	+
> > 	The default <ref> is "master".
> >
> > The rest of the patch looks good.
> 
> Myy reading did hiccup at the same "remote-tracking" used as if it
> were a noun, and your rewritten version reads much better.