RE: [PATCH 1/2] Documentation about triangular workflow
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- ALBERTIN TIMOTHEE p1514771 <timothee.albertin@etu.univ-lyon1.fr>
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- Nov 22, 2017, 15:13 UTC
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>On 17 November 2017 at 17:07, Daniel Bensoussan ><danielbensoussanbohm@gmail.com> wrote: >> +- If the maintainer accepts the changes, he merges them into the >> + **UPSTREAM** repository.
>Personally, I would prefer "they" and "their" over "he" and "his". I'm >not sure how universal this preference is, but see also 715a51bcaf (am: >counteract gender bias, 2016-07-08). I realize that "he" is already used >in this document...
This could be a good thing in order to be neutral. We can change this in the whole file.
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>> + ... The contributor >> +was forced to create a mail which shows the difference between the >> +new and the old code, and then send it to a maintainer to commit >> +and push it. This isn't convenient at all, neither for the >> +contributor, neither for the maintainer.
>"neither ... nor". That said, I find the tone of this paragraph a bit
>value-loaded ("forced ... isn't convenient at all"). It does sort of
>contradict or at least compare interestingly with how git.git itself is
>maintained. ;-) Maybe this could be framed in a more neutral way?Junio C Hamano told us the same thing about the motivation section, we'll change it the next patch.
>> +The goal of the triangular workflow is also that the rest of the >> +community or the company can review the code before it's in production. >> +Everyone can read on **PUBLISH** so everyone can review code >> +before the maintainer(s) merge it to **UPSTREAM**. It also means
>I think you can drop the "(s)". Your example workflow could have a >single maintainer. In a multi-maintainer workflow, the workflow would >still be the same. So no need to cover all bases by sprinkling "(s)" on >the text. (IMHO.)
We'll fix that.
Thank you for your review.
Timothée Albertin