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[GSoC PATCH 1/3] doc: gitprotocol-pack: fix pronoun-antecedent agreement

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LorenzoPegorari <lorenzo.pegorari2002@gmail.com>
Date
Mar 2, 2026, 16:10 UTC
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Fix "pronoun-antecedent agreement" errors.
Signed-off-by: LorenzoPegorari <lorenzo.pegorari2002@gmail.com>
---
 Documentation/gitprotocol-pack.adoc | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
diff --git a/Documentation/gitprotocol-pack.adoc b/Documentation/gitprotocol-pack.adoc
index 837b691c89..9952fac188 100644
--- a/Documentation/gitprotocol-pack.adoc
+++ b/Documentation/gitprotocol-pack.adoc
@@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ Extra Parameters
 ----------------
 
 The protocol provides a mechanism in which clients can send additional
-information in its first message to the server. These are called "Extra
+information in their first message to the server. These are called "Extra
 Parameters", and are supported by the Git, SSH, and HTTP protocols.
 
 Each Extra Parameter takes the form of `<key>=<value>` or `<key>`.
@@ -277,7 +277,7 @@ out of what the server said it could do with the first 'want' line.
   filter-request    =  PKT-LINE("filter" SP filter-spec)
 ----
 
-Clients MUST send all the obj-ids it wants from the reference
+Clients MUST send all the obj-ids they want from the reference
 discovery phase as 'want' lines. Clients MUST send at least one
 'want' command in the request body. Clients MUST NOT mention an
 obj-id in a 'want' command which did not appear in the response
-- 
2.43.0
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