# [PATCH 0/2] doc-diff fixes on maint 3 messages from 2021-10-24 to 2021-10-24. Participants: Martin Ågren. Thread: https://gitlist.dev/t/56773 ## Martin Ågren, 2021-10-24 17:08 Subject: [PATCH 0/2] doc-diff fixes on maint Message-ID: URL: https://gitlist.dev/e/cover.1635093692.git.martin.agren%40gmail.com ``` Two small patches to address some things I noticed when going through the doc-diff between v2.33.0 and 9d530dc002 ("The fourteenth batch", 2021-10-18). This is based on maint, since the original commits are already in v2.33.1. Martin Ågren (2): git.txt: fix typo git-bundle.txt: add missing words and punctuation Documentation/git-bundle.txt | 8 ++++---- Documentation/git.txt | 2 +- 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) -- 2.33.1.711.g9d530dc002 ``` ## Martin Ågren, 2021-10-24 17:08 Subject: [PATCH 1/2] git.txt: fix typo Message-ID: <3dac3680244e324fe88ca7bf61a940ca1e5018ea.1635093692.git.martin.agren@gmail.com> URL: https://gitlist.dev/e/3dac3680244e324fe88ca7bf61a940ca1e5018ea.1635093692.git.martin.agren%40gmail.com In-Reply-To: ``` Fix the spelling of "internally". Signed-off-by: Martin Ågren --- Documentation/git.txt | 2 +- 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/Documentation/git.txt b/Documentation/git.txt index 95fe6f31b4..6bb06d0b52 100644 --- a/Documentation/git.txt +++ b/Documentation/git.txt @@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ OPTIONS --version:: Prints the Git suite version that the 'git' program came from. + -This option is internaly converted to `git version ...` and accepts +This option is internally converted to `git version ...` and accepts the same options as the linkgit:git-version[1] command. If `--help` is also given, it takes precedence over `--version`. -- 2.33.1.711.g9d530dc002 ``` ## Martin Ågren, 2021-10-24 17:08 Subject: [PATCH 2/2] git-bundle.txt: add missing words and punctuation Message-ID: <7defb11c1c295550105a47bfdd9f030e0ef7c636.1635093692.git.martin.agren@gmail.com> URL: https://gitlist.dev/e/7defb11c1c295550105a47bfdd9f030e0ef7c636.1635093692.git.martin.agren%40gmail.com In-Reply-To: ``` Add an "and" to separate the two halves of the first sentence of the paragraph more. Add a comma to similarly separate the two halves of the second sentence a bit better. Add a period at the end of the paragraph. Further down in the file, add the missing "be" in "must be accompanied". Signed-off-by: Martin Ågren --- Documentation/git-bundle.txt | 8 ++++---- 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) diff --git a/Documentation/git-bundle.txt b/Documentation/git-bundle.txt index ac0d003835..50ea8c82ca 100644 --- a/Documentation/git-bundle.txt +++ b/Documentation/git-bundle.txt @@ -51,10 +51,10 @@ using the `--thin` option to linkgit:git-pack-objects[1], and unbundled using the `--fix-thin` option to linkgit:git-index-pack[1]. There is no option to create a "thick pack" when using revision -exclusions, users should not be concerned about the difference. By -using "thin packs" bundles created using exclusions are smaller in +exclusions, and users should not be concerned about the difference. By +using "thin packs", bundles created using exclusions are smaller in size. That they're "thin" under the hood is merely noted here as a -curiosity, and as a reference to other documentation +curiosity, and as a reference to other documentation. See link:technical/bundle-format.html[the `bundle-format` documentation] for more details and the discussion of "thin pack" in @@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ unbundle :: SPECIFYING REFERENCES --------------------- -Revisions must accompanied by reference names to be packaged in a +Revisions must be accompanied by reference names to be packaged in a bundle. More than one reference may be packaged, and more than one set of prerequisite objects can -- 2.33.1.711.g9d530dc002 ```