The patches are attached. Further some questions:
-see the explanations of the branch command, ca. line 280: wouldn't it be better to use other words than 'references'? -sentence "it shows all commits reachable from the parent commit": it seems wrong to me. The last commit is also shown. - chapter "Browsing revisions": it seems counterintuitive to me to have two different logics for the meaning of "branch1..branch2" and "branch1...branch2", according to whether it's the argument of `git log' or `git diff' -section "Check whether two branches point at the same history": 'git diff origin..master' -> shouldn't it be rather 'git diff branch1..branch2'? … or rewrite the example with branch1=origin and branch2=master.
greetings, kalle