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patchdoc: reword gitworflows for neutrality

Subject: [PATCH] doc: reword gitworflows for neutrality

## tl;dr

3 messages between Dec 8, 2017 and Dec 10, 2017. Diffs are folded; open one to read it.

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Daniel Bensoussan· Dec 8, 2017, 15:18 UTC · lore
Changed 'he' to 'them' to be more neutral in "gitworkflows.txt".
See discussion at: https://public-inbox.org/git/xmqqvahieeqy.fsf@gitster.mtv.corp.google.com/
Signed-off-by: Matthieu Moy <matthieu.moy@univ-lyon1.fr>
Signed-off-by: Timothee Albertin <timothee.albertin@etu.univ-lyon1.fr>
Signed-off-by: Nathan Payre <nathan.payre@etu.univ-lyon1.fr>
Signed-off-by: Daniel Bensoussan <daniel.bensoussan--bohm@etu.univ-lyon1.fr>
---
 Documentation/gitworkflows.txt | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
Show changes to Documentation/gitworkflows.txt +2 −2
diff --git a/Documentation/gitworkflows.txt b/Documentation/gitworkflows.txt
index 02569d0..926e044 100644
--- a/Documentation/gitworkflows.txt
+++ b/Documentation/gitworkflows.txt
@@ -407,8 +407,8 @@ follows.
 `git pull <url> <branch>`
 =====================================
 
-Occasionally, the maintainer may get merge conflicts when he tries to
-pull changes from downstream.  In this case, he can ask downstream to
+Occasionally, the maintainer may get merge conflicts when they try to
+pull changes from downstream.  In this case, they can ask downstream to
 do the merge and resolve the conflicts themselves (perhaps they will
 know better how to resolve them).  It is one of the rare cases where
 downstream 'should' merge from upstream.
-- 
2.11.0
Eric Sunshine· Dec 8, 2017, 18:01 UTC · re: Daniel Bensoussan · lore

Re: [PATCH] doc: reword gitworflows for neutrality

On Fri, Dec 8, 2017 at 10:18 AM, Daniel Bensoussan <daniel.bensoussan--bohm@etu.univ-lyon1.fr> wrote:

> doc: reword gitworflows for neutrality
s/gitworflows/gitworkflows/
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> Changed 'he' to 'them' to be more neutral in "gitworkflows.txt".
>
> See discussion at: https://public-inbox.org/git/xmqqvahieeqy.fsf@gitster.mtv.corp.google.com/
>
> Signed-off-by: Matthieu Moy <matthieu.moy@univ-lyon1.fr>
> Signed-off-by: Timothee Albertin <timothee.albertin@etu.univ-lyon1.fr>
> Signed-off-by: Nathan Payre <nathan.payre@etu.univ-lyon1.fr>
> Signed-off-by: Daniel Bensoussan <daniel.bensoussan--bohm@etu.univ-lyon1.fr>
> ---
> diff --git a/Documentation/gitworkflows.txt b/Documentation/gitworkflows.txt
> @@ -407,8 +407,8 @@ follows.
> -Occasionally, the maintainer may get merge conflicts when he tries to
> -pull changes from downstream.  In this case, he can ask downstream to
> +Occasionally, the maintainer may get merge conflicts when they try to
> +pull changes from downstream.  In this case, they can ask downstream to

As a native English speaker, I find the new phrasing odd, and think this may a step backward. How about trying a different approach? For example:

    Occasionally, the maintainer may get merge conflicts when trying
    to pull changes from downstream. In this case, it may make sense
    to ask downstream to do the merge and resolve the conflicts
    instead (since, presumably, downstream will know better how to
    resolve them).
>  do the merge and resolve the conflicts themselves (perhaps they will
>  know better how to resolve them).  It is one of the rare cases where
>  downstream 'should' merge from upstream.
BENSOUSSAN--BOHM DANIEL p1507430· Dec 10, 2017, 11:58 UTC · re: Eric Sunshine · lore

RE: [PATCH] doc: reword gitworflows for neutrality

>As a native English speaker, I find the new phrasing odd, and think
>this may a step backward. How about trying a different approach? For
>example:
    >Occasionally, the maintainer may get merge conflicts when trying
    >to pull changes from downstream. In this case, it may make sense
    >to ask downstream to do the merge and resolve the conflicts
    >instead (since, presumably, downstream will know better how to
    >resolve them).
Indeed, this is an other possibility.
Thanks for the review.
Daniel BENSOUSSAN-BOHM

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