# [PATCH] Documentation: improve phrasing in git-push.txt

2 messages from 2012-11-27 to 2012-11-27. Participants: Mark Szepieniec, Junio C Hamano.
Thread: https://gitlist.dev/t/32206

## Mark Szepieniec, 2012-11-27 01:37

Subject: [PATCH] Documentation: improve phrasing in git-push.txt
Message-ID: <1353980254-8033-1-git-send-email-mszepien@gmail.com>
URL: https://gitlist.dev/e/1353980254-8033-1-git-send-email-mszepien%40gmail.com

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The current version contains the sentence:

Further suppose that the other person already pushed changes leading to
A back to the original repository you two obtained the original commit
X.

which doesn't parse for me; I've changed it to

Further suppose that the other person already pushed changes leading to
A back to the original repository from which you two obtained the
original commit X.

Signed-off-by: Mark Szepieniec <mszepien@gmail.com>
---
 Documentation/git-push.txt |    3 ++-
 1 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 1 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/git-push.txt b/Documentation/git-push.txt
index fe46c42..6d19d59 100644
--- a/Documentation/git-push.txt
+++ b/Documentation/git-push.txt
@@ -286,7 +286,8 @@ leading to commit A.  The history looks like this:
 ----------------
 
 Further suppose that the other person already pushed changes leading to A
-back to the original repository you two obtained the original commit X.
+back to the original repository from which you two obtained the original
+commit X.
 
 The push done by the other person updated the branch that used to point at
 commit X to point at commit A.  It is a fast-forward.
-- 
1.7.5.4

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## Junio C Hamano, 2012-11-27 17:09

Subject: Re: [PATCH] Documentation: improve phrasing in git-push.txt
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URL: https://gitlist.dev/e/7vfw3vnfbg.fsf%40alter.siamese.dyndns.org
In-Reply-To: <1353980254-8033-1-git-send-email-mszepien@gmail.com>

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Sounds better; thanks.

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