# [PATCH 1/2] Makes some cleanup/review in gittutorial 1 messages from 2009-06-29 to 2009-06-29. Participants: Thadeu Lima de Souza Cascardo. Thread: https://gitlist.dev/t/19962 ## Thadeu Lima de Souza Cascardo, 2009-06-29 14:05 Subject: [PATCH 1/2] Makes some cleanup/review in gittutorial Message-ID: <1246284319-26451-1-git-send-email-cascardo@holoscopio.com> URL: https://gitlist.dev/e/1246284319-26451-1-git-send-email-cascardo%40holoscopio.com ``` From: Thadeu Lima de Souza Cascardo There are some different but little cleanup changes to fix some missing quotes, to fix what seemed to be an unended sentence, to reident a little paragraph with too large a sentence and fix a branch name that was referred to twice later by another name. --- Documentation/gittutorial.txt | 16 ++++++++-------- 1 files changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/Documentation/gittutorial.txt b/Documentation/gittutorial.txt index c7fa949..f8b5830 100644 --- a/Documentation/gittutorial.txt +++ b/Documentation/gittutorial.txt @@ -332,11 +332,11 @@ alice$ git log -p HEAD..FETCH_HEAD ------------------------------------------------ This operation is safe even if Alice has uncommitted local changes. -The range notation HEAD..FETCH_HEAD" means "show everything that is reachable -from the FETCH_HEAD but exclude anything that is reachable from HEAD. +The range notation "HEAD..FETCH_HEAD" means "show everything that is reachable +from the FETCH_HEAD but exclude anything that is reachable from HEAD". Alice already knows everything that leads to her current state (HEAD), -and reviewing what Bob has in his state (FETCH_HEAD) that she has not -seen with this command +and reviews what Bob has in his state (FETCH_HEAD) that she has not +seen with this command. If Alice wants to visualize what Bob did since their histories forked she can issue the following command: @@ -375,9 +375,9 @@ it easier: alice$ git remote add bob /home/bob/myrepo ------------------------------------------------ -With this, Alice can perform the first part of the "pull" operation alone using the -'git-fetch' command without merging them with her own branch, -using: +With this, Alice can perform the first part of the "pull" operation +alone using the 'git-fetch' command without merging them with her own +branch, using: ------------------------------------- alice$ git fetch bob @@ -566,7 +566,7 @@ $ git log v2.5.. Makefile # commits since v2.5 which modify You can also give 'git-log' a "range" of commits where the first is not necessarily an ancestor of the second; for example, if the tips of -the branches "stable-release" and "master" diverged from a common +the branches "stable" and "master" diverged from a common commit some time ago, then ------------------------------------- -- 1.6.3 ```