Re: [PATCH 1/3] Documentation: simplify refspec format description
Anders Melchiorsen <mail@cup.kalibalik.dk> writes:
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> diff --git a/Documentation/pull-fetch-param.txt b/Documentation/pull-fetch-param.txt
> index ebdd948..820c140 100644
> --- a/Documentation/pull-fetch-param.txt
> +++ b/Documentation/pull-fetch-param.txt
> @@ -5,10 +5,10 @@
> of a remote (see the section <<REMOTES,REMOTES>> below).
>
> <refspec>::
> - The canonical format of a <refspec> parameter is
> - `+?<src>:<dst>`; that is, an optional plus `{plus}`, followed
> - by the source ref, followed by a colon `:`, followed by
> - the destination ref.
> + The format of a <refspec> parameter is an optional plus
> + `{plus}`, followed by the source ref <src>, followed
> + by a colon `:`, followed by the destination ref <dst>.
> + Find various forms of refspecs in examples section.
> +
> The remote ref that matches <src>
> is fetched, and if <dst> is not empty string, the localI think this is *much* nicer, but I do not think git-fetch.txt has examples to fall back on.
The patch to git-push.txt would not have this issue; the exmaple is there in the page itself.
But I think it might be even better to briefly describe what it means, like this patch on top of yours does to git-push.txt. The fetch/pull side already has the corresponding description immediately after that, so I'd suggest just removing the reference to non-existing examples section.
I found your 2/3 and 3/3 good improvements.
Documentation/git-push.txt | 3 ++-
Documentation/pull-fetch-param.txt | 3 +--
2 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
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diff --git i/Documentation/git-push.txt w/Documentation/git-push.txt
index 3fd4bbb..ea45935 100644
--- i/Documentation/git-push.txt
+++ w/Documentation/git-push.txt
@@ -36,7 +36,8 @@ OPTIONS
The format of a <refspec> parameter is an optional plus
`{plus}`, followed by the source ref <src>, followed
by a colon `:`, followed by the destination ref <dst>.
- Find various forms of refspecs in examples section.
+ It is used to specify with what <src> object the <dst> ref
+ in the remote repository is to be updated.
+
The <src> side represents the source branch (or arbitrary
"SHA1 expression", such as `master~4` (four parents before the
diff --git i/Documentation/pull-fetch-param.txt w/Documentation/pull-fetch-param.txt
index 820c140..f9811f2 100644
--- i/Documentation/pull-fetch-param.txt
+++ w/Documentation/pull-fetch-param.txt
@@ -8,12 +8,11 @@
The format of a <refspec> parameter is an optional plus
`{plus}`, followed by the source ref <src>, followed
by a colon `:`, followed by the destination ref <dst>.
- Find various forms of refspecs in examples section.
+
The remote ref that matches <src>
is fetched, and if <dst> is not empty string, the local
ref that matches it is fast forwarded using <src>.
-Again, if the optional plus `+` is used, the local ref
+If the optional plus `+` is used, the local ref
is updated even if it does not result in a fast forward
update.
+