Avoid abbreviation 'revs', improve the language a bit.
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Documentation/git-clone.txt | 6 +++---
1 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/Documentation/git-clone.txt b/Documentation/git-clone.txt
index 253f4f0..cca14d6 100644
--- a/Documentation/git-clone.txt
+++ b/Documentation/git-clone.txt
@@ -111,11 +111,11 @@ OPTIONS
--depth <depth>::
Create a 'shallow' clone with a history truncated to the
- specified number of revs. A shallow repository has
+ specified number of revisions. A shallow repository has a
number of limitations (you cannot clone or fetch from
it, nor push from nor into it), but is adequate if you
- want to only look at near the tip of a large project
- with a long history, and would want to send in a fixes
+ are only interested in the recent history of a large project
+ with a long history, and would want to send in fixes
as patches.
<repository>::
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