From: Jakub Narebski <jnareb@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 19 Nov 2006 22:59:13 GMT
Subject: Re: Patch to tutorial.txt
Message-ID: <ejqnh8$peb$1@sea.gmane.org>
In-Reply-To: <4d8e3fd30611191444r710f23e5uc488d35aa4abaf06@mail.gmail.com>

Paolo Ciarrocchi wrote:

> From 0b98769dfe16e3ba8cde698b75cb1067658c38e7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001

I think you should remove this line.

> From: Paolo Ciarrocchi <paolo.ciarrocchi@gmail.com>
> Date: Sun, 19 Nov 2006 23:41:31 +0100
> Subject: [PATCH] One of the comment was not really clear, rephrased to
> make it easier to be understood by the reader

Wordwrap. Perhaps it would be better to split description into short line,
and two-line description.

[...]
>  ------------------------------------------------
> 
>  at this point the two branches have diverged, with different changes
> -made in each.  To merge the changes made in the two branches, run
> +made in each.  To merge the changes made in experimental into master run

I would rather say:
  To merge the changes made in the two branches into master, run

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Jakub Narebski
Warsaw, Poland
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