From: Christian Couder Date: Fri, 26 Jun 2015 15:28:27 GMT Subject: Re: [PATCH] bisect: revise manpage Message-ID: In-Reply-To: <558D68A7.6010608@alum.mit.edu> On Fri, Jun 26, 2015 at 4:58 PM, Michael Haggerty wrote: > On 06/26/2015 03:15 PM, Christian Couder wrote: >> On Fri, Jun 26, 2015 at 3:00 PM, Matthieu Moy >> wrote: >>> Christian Couder writes: >>> >>>> On Fri, Jun 26, 2015 at 1:30 PM, Michael Haggerty wrote: >>>> >>>> [...] >>>> >>>>> +Eventually there will be no more revisions left to bisect, and the >>>>> +command will print out a description of the first bad commit, and also >>>>> +create a reference called `refs/bisect/bad` that points at that >>>>> +commit. >>>> >>>> This could be understood as meaning that `refs/bisect/bad` is created >>>> only at the end of the bisection. >>>> >>>>> -Eventually there will be no more revisions left to bisect, and you >>>>> -will have been left with the first bad kernel revision in "refs/bisect/bad". >>>> >>>> The original looks better to me in this regard. >>> >>> I'm changing it to: >>> >>> Eventually there will be no more revisions left to bisect, and the >>> command will print out a description of the first bad commit. The >>> reference `refs/bisect/bad` created by bisect will point at that >>> commit. > > I agree that is better. > >> For the last sentence I'd suggest: >> >> The reference called `refs/bisect/bad` will point at that commit. > > Or maybe > > The reference `refs/bisect/bad` will be left pointing at that commit. Yeah ok.