From: Thomas Rast
Date: Thu, 21 Nov 2013 20:58:58 GMT
Subject: Re: [RFC PATCH] Revamp git-cherry(1)
Message-ID: <874n754gkt.fsf@thomasrast.ch>
In-Reply-To: <20131121115423.GC7171@sigill.intra.peff.net>
Jeff King writes:
> On Thu, Nov 21, 2013 at 12:30:56PM +0100, Thomas Rast wrote:
>
>> +Later, you can whether your changes have been applied by saying (still
>> +on `topic`):
>
> s/can/& see/ ?
>
>> +Note that this uses , and assumes that
>> +`core.autosetupmerge` is enabled (the default).
>
> I couldn't quite parse this. Is there a word missing before the comma,
> or is it "uses and assumes that..."?
I will just let this stand as evidence that I had a bad day. Two
sentences ruined by botched editing in all of five paragraphs. Sheesh.
Thanks for reading carefully.
> Given that it is the default, I wonder if it is worth mentioning at all.
> Even I, who knows what autosetupmerge does, took a minute to figure out
> why it is relevant here. I suspect it may just confuse most readers.
Ok, then let's remove it.
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Thomas Rast
tr@thomasrast.ch