From: Junio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com>
Date: Tue, 18 Sep 2012 20:36:25 GMT
Subject: Re: [PATCH 3/8] Doc: Improve shallow depth wording
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In-Reply-To: <7vlig9w6a7.fsf@alter.siamese.dyndns.org>

Junio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com> writes:

> Philip Oakley <philipoakley@iee.org> writes:
>
>> Avoid confusion in compound sentence about the start of the commit set
>> and the depth measure. Use two sentences.
>
> Dropping the first ',' after "positive depth" does not seem to make
> it any easier to read (I personally think it makes it a lot harder
> to read).  Splitting the tail-end of the sentence into a separate
> sentence does make it easier to read, though.

Will add ',' locally and queue; no need to resend.

Thanks.