From: Marc Branchaud Date: Wed, 18 Jan 2012 22:35:04 GMT Subject: Re: [PATCH] pulling signed tag: add howto document Message-ID: <4F174918.7040604@xiplink.com> In-Reply-To: <7v1uqwmyt6.fsf@alter.siamese.dyndns.org> On 12-01-18 05:27 PM, Junio C Hamano wrote: > Marc Branchaud writes: > >> It might be better to just move the footnote to the end of the next sentence. > > Ok. How does this version look? The highlights are: > > * remove footnotes and spell them out inline, like "Note that..." > > * "a single liner" -> "a one-liner" IMO "one-liner" should be "one-line", but toMAYto toMAHto... The rest looks good. M.