From: Jeff King <peff@peff.net>
Date: Thu, 14 Sep 2017 14:41:20 GMT
Subject: Re: [PATCH v2] commit-template: change a message to be more intuitive
Message-ID: <20170914144120.oqx2trhccweiu7qo@sigill.intra.peff.net>
In-Reply-To: <2480c33b-7e44-5c7c-cd31-feae9168b9dc@gmail.com>

On Thu, Sep 14, 2017 at 07:47:51PM +0530, Kaartic Sivaraam wrote:

> > > -	const char *explanation = _("Do not touch the line above.\nEverything below will be removed.");
> > > +	const char *explanation = _("Do not modify or remove the line above.\nEverything below will be removed.");
> > I don't want to complicate things. But now - due to the repeated usage
> > of "remove" - these two sentences seem to be connected by an invisible
> > "or else" ("will" vs. "would" not withstanding). i.e. "or else
> > everything below will be removed, too", which is wrong. Before, they
> > were separated more clearly.
> 
> At least I don't think they are connected by an invisible "or else" because
> they appear on different lines,

You could switch out the second "removed" for "ignored", which I think
has the same meaning but avoids repeating the same word. So:

  # ------------------------ >8 ------------------------
  # Do not modify or remove the line above.
  # Everything below will be ignored.

(I might say "everything below it" to be more precise).

I dunno. We are deep in bikeshed territory here, and I admit I don't
overly care that much in the first place.

-Peff