From: Jeff King <peff@peff.net>
Date: Fri, 11 Jul 2008 02:41:37 GMT
Subject: Re: [PATCH] tutorial: clarify "pull" is "fetch + merge"
Message-ID: <20080711024137.GA14967@sigill.intra.peff.net>
In-Reply-To: <7vskuho3lm.fsf_-_@gitster.siamese.dyndns.org>

On Thu, Jul 10, 2008 at 02:01:57PM -0700, Junio C Hamano wrote:

> This adds a missing demonstration of the longhand form, and a new
> paragraph to explain why some people might want to fetch before pull.

A few English/typo nits below.

> +Alice can peek what Bob did without merging first, using the "fetch"

s/peek/& at/

> +command; this allows Alice to inspect what bob did, using a special

s/bob/\u&/

> -With this, Alice can perform the first operation alone using the
> +With this, Alice can perform the first part of "pull" operation alone using the

Should be either 'the "pull" operation' or 'a "pull" operation'.

-Peff