From: Philip Oakley <philipoakley@iee.org>
Date: Tue, 18 Sep 2012 21:30:07 GMT
Subject: Re: [PATCH 3/8] Doc: Improve shallow depth wording
Message-ID: <060D2B93282044BBB6189F04CB34E828@PhilipOakley>
In-Reply-To: <7vmx0nkr06.fsf@alter.siamese.dyndns.org>

From: "Junio C Hamano" <gitster@pobox.com>
> Junio C Hamano <gitster@pobox.com> writes:
>
>> Philip Oakley <philipoakley@iee.org> writes:
>>
>>> Avoid confusion in compound sentence about the start of the commit 
>>> set
>>> and the depth measure. Use two sentences.
>>
>> Dropping the first ',' after "positive depth" does not seem to make
>> it any easier to read (I personally think it makes it a lot harder
>> to read).  Splitting the tail-end of the sentence into a separate
>> sentence does make it easier to read, though.
>
> Will add ',' locally and queue; no need to resend.
>
> Thanks.

And the simple corrections to patches 5/6/7 ? Shall I send?
Philip