{"thread":{"id":"7839","subject":"[PATCH 4/5] core-tutorial: minor fixes","startedAt":"2007-04-25T14:18:28Z","lastAt":"2007-04-25T14:18:28Z","messageCount":1,"participants":["Luiz Fernando N. Capitulino"],"isPatch":true,"patchVersion":1,"patchTotal":5},"messages":[{"id":"40408","messageId":"20070425111828.3e66c3f3@localhost","threadId":"7839","inReplyTo":null,"subject":"[PATCH 4/5] core-tutorial: minor fixes","fromName":"Luiz Fernando N. Capitulino","fromEmail":"lcapitulino@mandriva.com.br","sentAt":"2007-04-25T14:18:28Z","receivedAt":"2007-04-25T14:18:28Z","isPatch":true,"sender":{"key":"lcapitulino@mandriva.com.br","avatar":null},"body":"- Do not break the line when it's not needed\n- s/Your/You\n\nSigned-off-by: Luiz Fernando N. Capitulino <lcapitulino@mandriva.com.br>\n---\n Documentation/core-tutorial.txt |    9 ++++-----\n 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)\n\ndiff --git a/Documentation/core-tutorial.txt b/Documentation/core-tutorial.txt\nindex 97cdb90..6b9b9ad 100644\n--- a/Documentation/core-tutorial.txt\n+++ b/Documentation/core-tutorial.txt\n@@ -319,10 +319,9 @@ argument to `git-commit-tree`.\n `git-commit-tree` normally takes several arguments -- it wants to know\n what the 'parent' of a commit was, but since this is the first commit\n ever in this new repository, and it has no parents, we only need to pass in\n-the object name of the tree. However, `git-commit-tree`\n-also wants to get a commit message\n-on its standard input, and it will write out the resulting object name for the\n-commit to its standard output.\n+the object name of the tree. However, `git-commit-tree` also wants to get a\n+commit message on its standard input, and it will write out the resulting\n+object name for the commit to its standard output.\n \n And this is where we create the `.git/refs/heads/master` file\n which is pointed at by `HEAD`. This file is supposed to contain\n@@ -1304,7 +1303,7 @@ So, we can use somebody else's work from a remote repository, but\n how can *you* prepare a repository to let other people pull from\n it?\n \n-Your do your real work in your working tree that has your\n+You do your real work in your working tree that has your\n primary repository hanging under it as its `.git` subdirectory.\n You *could* make that repository accessible remotely and ask\n people to pull from it, but in practice that is not the way\n-- \n1.5.1.1.320.g1cf2\n"}]}