{"thread":{"id":"60502","subject":"[PATCH] RelNotes: minor wording fixes in 2.43.0 release notes","startedAt":"2023-11-11T04:02:26Z","lastAt":"2023-11-12T01:00:07Z","messageCount":2,"participants":["Elijah Newren via GitGitGadget","Junio C Hamano"],"isPatch":true,"patchVersion":1,"patchTotal":null},"messages":[{"id":"484745","messageId":"pull.1611.git.1699675340400.gitgitgadget@gmail.com","threadId":"60502","inReplyTo":null,"subject":"[PATCH] RelNotes: minor wording fixes in 2.43.0 release notes","fromName":"Elijah Newren via GitGitGadget","fromEmail":"gitgitgadget@gmail.com","sentAt":"2023-11-11T04:02:20Z","receivedAt":"2023-11-11T04:02:26Z","isPatch":true,"sender":{"key":"newren@gmail.com","avatar":"https://avatars.githubusercontent.com/u/5455730?v=4"},"body":"From: Elijah Newren <newren@gmail.com>\n\nSigned-off-by: Elijah Newren <newren@gmail.com>\n---\n    RelNotes: minor wording fixes in 2.43.0 release notes\n\nPublished-As: https://github.com/gitgitgadget/git/releases/tag/pr-1611%2Fnewren%2Frelnotes-wording-improvements-v1\nFetch-It-Via: git fetch https://github.com/gitgitgadget/git pr-1611/newren/relnotes-wording-improvements-v1\nPull-Request: https://github.com/gitgitgadget/git/pull/1611\n\n Documentation/RelNotes/2.43.0.txt | 36 +++++++++++++++----------------\n 1 file changed, 18 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)\n\ndiff --git a/Documentation/RelNotes/2.43.0.txt b/Documentation/RelNotes/2.43.0.txt\nindex 74f304b1b2b..770543c464e 100644\n--- a/Documentation/RelNotes/2.43.0.txt\n+++ b/Documentation/RelNotes/2.43.0.txt\n@@ -27,14 +27,14 @@ UI, Workflows & Features\n    a branch that is checked out and protect it.  Rephrase the message\n    to say that the branch is in use.\n \n- * Hourly and other schedule of \"git maintenance\" jobs are randomly\n+ * Hourly and other schedules of \"git maintenance\" jobs are randomly\n    distributed now.\n \n  * \"git cmd -h\" learned to signal which options can be negated by\n    listing such options like \"--[no-]opt\".\n \n- * The way authentication related data other than passwords (e.g.\n-   oath token and password expiration data) are stored in libsecret\n+ * The way authentication related data other than passwords (e.g.,\n+   oauth token and password expiration data) are stored in libsecret\n    keyrings has been rethought.\n \n  * Update the libsecret and wincred credential helpers to correctly\n@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@ UI, Workflows & Features\n \n  * The default log message created by \"git revert\", when reverting a\n    commit that records a revert, has been tweaked, to encourage people\n-   describe complex \"revert of revert of revert\" situation better in\n+   to describe complex \"revert of revert of revert\" situations better in\n    their own words.\n \n  * The command-line completion support (in contrib/) learned to\n@@ -77,8 +77,8 @@ UI, Workflows & Features\n \n  * The command line completion script (in contrib/) can be told to\n    complete aliases by including \": git <cmd> ;\" in the alias to tell\n-   it that the alias should be completed similar to how \"git <cmd>\" is\n-   completed.  The parsing code for the alias as been loosened to\n+   it that the alias should be completed in a similar way to how \"git <cmd>\" is\n+   completed.  The parsing code for the alias has been loosened to\n    allow ';' without an extra space before it.\n \n  * \"git for-each-ref\" and friends learned to apply mailmap to\n@@ -117,8 +117,8 @@ Performance, Internal Implementation, Development Support etc.\n  * Flaky \"git p4\" tests, as well as \"git svn\" tests, are now skipped\n    in the (rather expensive) sanitizer CI job.\n \n- * Tests with LSan from time to time seem to emit harmless message\n-   that makes our tests unnecessarily flaky; we work it around by\n+ * Tests with LSan from time to time seem to emit harmless messages\n+   that make our tests unnecessarily flaky; we work around it by\n    filtering the uninteresting output.\n \n  * Unused parameters to functions are marked as such, and/or removed,\n@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ Performance, Internal Implementation, Development Support etc.\n \n  * Test coverage for trailers has been improved.\n \n- * The code to iterate over loose references have been optimized to\n+ * The code to iterate over loose references has been optimized to\n    reduce the number of lstat() system calls.\n \n  * The codepaths that read \"chunk\" formatted files have been corrected\n@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ Fixes since v2.42\n    branch tips at the same time will not waste building and testing\n    the same thing twice.\n \n- * The commit-graph verification code that detects mixture of zero and\n+ * The commit-graph verification code that detects a mixture of zero and\n    non-zero generation numbers has been updated.\n \n  * \"git diff -w --exit-code\" with various options did not work\n@@ -170,20 +170,20 @@ Fixes since v2.42\n    the sequencer code has been cleaned up for consistency.\n \n  * \"git diff --no-such-option\" and other corner cases around the exit\n-   status of the \"diff\" command has been corrected.\n+   status of the \"diff\" command have been corrected.\n \n  * \"git for-each-ref --sort='contents:size'\" sorts the refs according\n    to size numerically, giving a ref that points at a blob twelve-byte\n    (12) long before showing a blob hundred-byte (100) long.\n \n- * We now limit depth of the tree objects and maximum length of\n+ * We now limit the depth of the tree objects and maximum length of\n    pathnames recorded in tree objects.\n    (merge 4d5693ba05 jk/tree-name-and-depth-limit later to maint).\n \n  * Various fixes to the behavior of \"rebase -i\" when the command got\n    interrupted by conflicting changes.\n \n- * References from description of the `--patch` option in various\n+ * References from a description of the `--patch` option in various\n    manual pages have been simplified and improved.\n \n  * \"git grep -e A --no-or -e B\" is accepted, even though the negation\n@@ -203,8 +203,8 @@ Fixes since v2.42\n    information for a file when fsmonitor knows it is clean and ended\n    up behaving as if it is not clean, which has been corrected.\n \n- * Clarify how \"alias.foo = : git cmd ; aliased-command-string\" should\n-   be spelled with necessary whitespaces around punctuation marks to\n+ * Clarify how \"alias.foo = : git cmd ; aliased-command-string\" should be\n+   spelled with necessary whitespace around punctuation marks to\n    work.\n \n  * HTTP Header redaction code has been adjusted for a newer version of\n@@ -256,9 +256,9 @@ Fixes since v2.42\n    by \"git stash create\" now errors out.\n    (merge d9b6634589 jc/fail-stash-to-store-non-stash later to maint).\n \n- * The index file has room only for lower 32-bit of the file size in\n+ * The index file has room only for the lower 32-bit of the file size in\n    the cached stat information, which means cached stat information\n-   will have 0 in its sd_size member for a file whose size is multiple\n+   will have 0 in its sd_size member for a file whose size is a multiple\n    of 4GiB.  This is mistaken for a racily clean path.  Avoid it by\n    storing a bogus sd_size value instead for such files.\n    (merge 5143ac07b1 bc/racy-4gb-files later to maint).\n@@ -281,7 +281,7 @@ Fixes since v2.42\n    20 months or so, which has been corrected.\n \n  * \"git send-email\" did not have certain pieces of data computed yet\n-   when it tried to validate the outging messages and its recipient\n+   when it tried to validate the outgoing messages and its recipient\n    addresses, which has been sorted out.\n \n  * \"git bugreport\" learned to complain when it received a command line\n\nbase-commit: dadef801b365989099a9929e995589e455c51fed\n-- \ngitgitgadget\n"},{"id":"484766","messageId":"xmqqleb3rdkj.fsf@gitster.g","threadId":"60502","inReplyTo":"pull.1611.git.1699675340400.gitgitgadget@gmail.com","subject":"Re: [PATCH] RelNotes: minor wording fixes in 2.43.0 release notes","fromName":"Junio C Hamano","fromEmail":"gitster@pobox.com","sentAt":"2023-11-12T00:59:56Z","receivedAt":"2023-11-12T01:00:07Z","isPatch":true,"sender":{"key":"gitster@pobox.com","avatar":"https://avatars.githubusercontent.com/u/54884?v=4"},"body":"\"Elijah Newren via GitGitGadget\" <gitgitgadget@gmail.com> writes:\n\n> From: Elijah Newren <newren@gmail.com>\n>\n> Signed-off-by: Elijah Newren <newren@gmail.com>\n> ---\n>     RelNotes: minor wording fixes in 2.43.0 release notes\n\nThanks, will directly apply on 'master'.\n"}]}