{"thread":{"id":"56773","subject":"[PATCH 0/2] doc-diff fixes on maint","startedAt":"2021-10-24T17:08:50Z","lastAt":"2021-10-24T17:09:07Z","messageCount":3,"participants":["Martin Ågren"],"isPatch":true,"patchVersion":1,"patchTotal":2},"messages":[{"id":"439492","messageId":"cover.1635093692.git.martin.agren@gmail.com","threadId":"56773","inReplyTo":null,"subject":"[PATCH 0/2] doc-diff fixes on maint","fromName":"Martin Ågren","fromEmail":"martin.agren@gmail.com","sentAt":"2021-10-24T17:08:19Z","receivedAt":"2021-10-24T17:08:50Z","isPatch":true,"sender":{"key":"martin.agren@gmail.com","avatar":null},"body":"Two small patches to address some things I noticed when going through\nthe doc-diff between v2.33.0 and 9d530dc002 (\"The fourteenth batch\",\n2021-10-18).\n\nThis is based on maint, since the original commits are already in\nv2.33.1.\n\nMartin Ågren (2):\n  git.txt: fix typo\n  git-bundle.txt: add missing words and punctuation\n\n Documentation/git-bundle.txt | 8 ++++----\n Documentation/git.txt        | 2 +-\n 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)\n\n-- \n2.33.1.711.g9d530dc002\n\n"},{"id":"439493","messageId":"3dac3680244e324fe88ca7bf61a940ca1e5018ea.1635093692.git.martin.agren@gmail.com","threadId":"56773","inReplyTo":"cover.1635093692.git.martin.agren@gmail.com","subject":"[PATCH 1/2] git.txt: fix typo","fromName":"Martin Ågren","fromEmail":"martin.agren@gmail.com","sentAt":"2021-10-24T17:08:20Z","receivedAt":"2021-10-24T17:09:01Z","isPatch":true,"sender":{"key":"martin.agren@gmail.com","avatar":null},"body":"Fix the spelling of \"internally\".\n\nSigned-off-by: Martin Ågren <martin.agren@gmail.com>\n---\n Documentation/git.txt | 2 +-\n 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)\n\ndiff --git a/Documentation/git.txt b/Documentation/git.txt\nindex 95fe6f31b4..6bb06d0b52 100644\n--- a/Documentation/git.txt\n+++ b/Documentation/git.txt\n@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ OPTIONS\n --version::\n \tPrints the Git suite version that the 'git' program came from.\n +\n-This option is internaly converted to `git version ...` and accepts\n+This option is internally converted to `git version ...` and accepts\n the same options as the linkgit:git-version[1] command. If `--help` is\n also given, it takes precedence over `--version`.\n \n-- \n2.33.1.711.g9d530dc002\n\n"},{"id":"439494","messageId":"7defb11c1c295550105a47bfdd9f030e0ef7c636.1635093692.git.martin.agren@gmail.com","threadId":"56773","inReplyTo":"cover.1635093692.git.martin.agren@gmail.com","subject":"[PATCH 2/2] git-bundle.txt: add missing words and punctuation","fromName":"Martin Ågren","fromEmail":"martin.agren@gmail.com","sentAt":"2021-10-24T17:08:21Z","receivedAt":"2021-10-24T17:09:07Z","isPatch":true,"sender":{"key":"martin.agren@gmail.com","avatar":null},"body":"Add an \"and\" to separate the two halves of the first sentence of the\nparagraph more. Add a comma to similarly separate the two halves of the\nsecond sentence a bit better. Add a period at the end of the paragraph.\n\nFurther down in the file, add the missing \"be\" in \"must be accompanied\".\n\nSigned-off-by: Martin Ågren <martin.agren@gmail.com>\n---\n Documentation/git-bundle.txt | 8 ++++----\n 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)\n\ndiff --git a/Documentation/git-bundle.txt b/Documentation/git-bundle.txt\nindex ac0d003835..50ea8c82ca 100644\n--- a/Documentation/git-bundle.txt\n+++ b/Documentation/git-bundle.txt\n@@ -51,10 +51,10 @@ using the `--thin` option to linkgit:git-pack-objects[1], and\n unbundled using the `--fix-thin` option to linkgit:git-index-pack[1].\n \n There is no option to create a \"thick pack\" when using revision\n-exclusions, users should not be concerned about the difference. By\n-using \"thin packs\" bundles created using exclusions are smaller in\n+exclusions, and users should not be concerned about the difference. By\n+using \"thin packs\", bundles created using exclusions are smaller in\n size. That they're \"thin\" under the hood is merely noted here as a\n-curiosity, and as a reference to other documentation\n+curiosity, and as a reference to other documentation.\n \n See link:technical/bundle-format.html[the `bundle-format`\n documentation] for more details and the discussion of \"thin pack\" in\n@@ -144,7 +144,7 @@ unbundle <file>::\n SPECIFYING REFERENCES\n ---------------------\n \n-Revisions must accompanied by reference names to be packaged in a\n+Revisions must be accompanied by reference names to be packaged in a\n bundle.\n \n More than one reference may be packaged, and more than one set of prerequisite objects can\n-- \n2.33.1.711.g9d530dc002\n\n"}]}