{"thread":{"id":"50479","subject":"[PATCH 2/2] RelNotes/2.21: misc typo/English fixups","startedAt":"2019-02-12T06:33:07Z","lastAt":"2019-02-12T06:33:07Z","messageCount":1,"participants":["Jeff King"],"isPatch":true,"patchVersion":1,"patchTotal":2},"messages":[{"id":"369130","messageId":"20190212063304.GB21872@sigill.intra.peff.net","threadId":"50479","inReplyTo":null,"subject":"[PATCH 2/2] RelNotes/2.21: misc typo/English fixups","fromName":"Jeff King","fromEmail":"peff@peff.net","sentAt":"2019-02-12T06:33:04Z","receivedAt":"2019-02-12T06:33:07Z","isPatch":true,"sender":{"key":"peff@peff.net","avatar":"https://avatars.githubusercontent.com/u/45925?v=4"},"body":"These are just some small fixes I noticed doing a complete read-through\n(there are a few cases I left that are incomplete or abbreviated\nsentences, but I think those are OK in this sort of bullet-list style).\n\nSigned-off-by: Jeff King <peff@peff.net>\n---\n Documentation/RelNotes/2.21.0.txt | 10 +++++-----\n 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)\n\ndiff --git a/Documentation/RelNotes/2.21.0.txt b/Documentation/RelNotes/2.21.0.txt\nindex 77b8d9d221..702ebfcdc3 100644\n--- a/Documentation/RelNotes/2.21.0.txt\n+++ b/Documentation/RelNotes/2.21.0.txt\n@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ UI, Workflows & Features\n    the fast-export side has been made.\n \n  * \"git push $there $src:$dst\" rejects when $dst is not a fully\n-   qualified refname and not clear what the end user meant.  The\n+   qualified refname and it is not clear what the end user meant.  The\n    codepath has been taught to give a clearer error message, and also\n    guess where the push should go by taking the type of the pushed\n    object into account (e.g. a tag object would want to go under\n@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ Performance, Internal Implementation, Development Support etc.\n    (non-)existence of loose objects.\n \n  * More codepaths have become aware of working with in-core repository\n-   instance other than the default \"the_repository\".\n+   instances other than the default \"the_repository\".\n \n  * The \"strncat()\" function is now among the banned functions.\n \n@@ -125,13 +125,13 @@ Performance, Internal Implementation, Development Support etc.\n  * The in-core repository instances are passed through more codepaths.\n \n  * Update the protocol message specification to allow only the limited\n-   use of scaled quantities.  This is ensure potential compatibility\n-   issues will not go out of hand.\n+   use of scaled quantities.  This is to ensure potential compatibility\n+   issues will not get out of hand.\n \n  * Micro-optimize the code that prepares commit objects to be walked\n    by \"git rev-list\" when the commit-graph is available.\n \n- * \"git fetch\" and \"git upload-pack\" learned to send all exchange over\n+ * \"git fetch\" and \"git upload-pack\" learned to send all exchanges over\n    the sideband channel while talking the v2 protocol.\n \n  * The codepath to write out commit-graph has been optimized by\n-- \n2.21.0.rc0.568.gbf84974d35\n"}]}