{"thread":{"id":"31596","subject":"[PATCHv2 3/8] Doc: Improve shallow depth wording","startedAt":"2012-09-18T23:25:29Z","lastAt":"2012-09-18T23:25:29Z","messageCount":1,"participants":["Philip Oakley"],"isPatch":false,"patchVersion":null,"patchTotal":null},"messages":[{"id":"199428","messageId":"1348010734-664-4-git-send-email-philipoakley@iee.org","threadId":"31596","inReplyTo":null,"subject":"[PATCHv2 3/8] Doc: Improve shallow depth wording","fromName":"Philip Oakley","fromEmail":"philipoakley@iee.org","sentAt":"2012-09-18T23:25:29Z","receivedAt":"2012-09-18T23:25:29Z","isPatch":false,"sender":{"key":"philipoakley@iee.email","avatar":"https://avatars.githubusercontent.com/u/914343?v=4"},"body":"Avoid confusion in compound sentence about the start of the commit set\nand the depth measure. Use two sentences.\n\nSigned-off-by: Philip Oakley <philipoakley@iee.org>\n\ndiff --git a/Documentation/technical/pack-protocol.txt b/Documentation/technical/pack-protocol.txt\nindex 49cdc57..d51e20f 100644\n--- a/Documentation/technical/pack-protocol.txt\n+++ b/Documentation/technical/pack-protocol.txt\n@@ -259,8 +259,10 @@ a positive depth, this step is skipped.\n ----\n \n If the client has requested a positive depth, the server will compute\n-the set of commits which are no deeper than the desired depth, starting\n-at the client's wants. The server writes 'shallow' lines for each\n+the set of commits which are no deeper than the desired depth. The set\n+of commits start at the client's wants.\n+\n+The server writes 'shallow' lines for each\n commit whose parents will not be sent as a result. The server writes\n an 'unshallow' line for each commit which the client has indicated is\n shallow, but is no longer shallow at the currently requested depth\n-- \n1.7.8.msysgit.0\n"}]}