{"thread":{"id":"19964","subject":"[PATCH] Makes some cleanup/review in gittutorial","startedAt":"2009-06-29T15:13:58Z","lastAt":"2009-06-29T15:13:58Z","messageCount":1,"participants":["Thadeu Lima de Souza Cascardo"],"isPatch":true,"patchVersion":1,"patchTotal":null},"messages":[{"id":"117161","messageId":"1246288438-29119-1-git-send-email-cascardo@holoscopio.com","threadId":"19964","inReplyTo":"7vprcnccci.fsf@alter.siamese.dyndns.org","subject":"[PATCH] Makes some cleanup/review in gittutorial","fromName":"Thadeu Lima de Souza Cascardo","fromEmail":"cascardo@holoscopio.com","sentAt":"2009-06-29T15:13:58Z","receivedAt":"2009-06-29T15:13:58Z","isPatch":true,"sender":{"key":"cascardo@holoscopio.com","avatar":null},"body":"There are some different but little cleanup changes to fix some missing\nquotes, to fix what seemed to be an unended sentence, to reident a\nlittle paragraph with too large a sentence and fix a branch name that\nwas referred to twice later by another name.\n\nSigned-off-by: Thadeu Lima de Souza Cascardo <cascardo@holoscopio.com>\n---\n Documentation/gittutorial.txt |   24 ++++++++++++------------\n 1 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)\n\ndiff --git a/Documentation/gittutorial.txt b/Documentation/gittutorial.txt\nindex c7fa949..cf0689c 100644\n--- a/Documentation/gittutorial.txt\n+++ b/Documentation/gittutorial.txt\n@@ -332,11 +332,11 @@ alice$ git log -p HEAD..FETCH_HEAD\n ------------------------------------------------\n \n This operation is safe even if Alice has uncommitted local changes.\n-The range notation HEAD..FETCH_HEAD\" means \"show everything that is reachable\n-from the FETCH_HEAD but exclude anything that is reachable from HEAD.\n+The range notation \"HEAD..FETCH_HEAD\" means \"show everything that is reachable\n+from the FETCH_HEAD but exclude anything that is reachable from HEAD\".\n Alice already knows everything that leads to her current state (HEAD),\n-and reviewing what Bob has in his state (FETCH_HEAD) that she has not\n-seen with this command\n+and reviews what Bob has in his state (FETCH_HEAD) that she has not\n+seen with this command.\n \n If Alice wants to visualize what Bob did since their histories forked\n she can issue the following command:\n@@ -375,9 +375,9 @@ it easier:\n alice$ git remote add bob /home/bob/myrepo\n ------------------------------------------------\n \n-With this, Alice can perform the first part of the \"pull\" operation alone using the\n-'git-fetch' command without merging them with her own branch,\n-using:\n+With this, Alice can perform the first part of the \"pull\" operation\n+alone using the 'git-fetch' command without merging them with her own\n+branch, using:\n \n -------------------------------------\n alice$ git fetch bob\n@@ -566,22 +566,22 @@ $ git log v2.5.. Makefile       # commits since v2.5 which modify\n \n You can also give 'git-log' a \"range\" of commits where the first is not\n necessarily an ancestor of the second; for example, if the tips of\n-the branches \"stable-release\" and \"master\" diverged from a common\n+the branches \"stable\" and \"master\" diverged from a common\n commit some time ago, then\n \n -------------------------------------\n-$ git log stable..experimental\n+$ git log stable..master\n -------------------------------------\n \n-will list commits made in the experimental branch but not in the\n+will list commits made in the master branch but not in the\n stable branch, while\n \n -------------------------------------\n-$ git log experimental..stable\n+$ git log master..stable\n -------------------------------------\n \n will show the list of commits made on the stable branch but not\n-the experimental branch.\n+the master branch.\n \n The 'git-log' command has a weakness: it must present commits in a\n list.  When the history has lines of development that diverged and\n-- \n1.6.3\n"}]}