{"thread":{"id":"15648","subject":"[PATCH] Fixed some grammatical errors in git-rebase.txt documentation.","startedAt":"2008-09-24T09:51:27Z","lastAt":"2008-09-24T09:51:27Z","messageCount":1,"participants":["Garry Dolley"],"isPatch":true,"patchVersion":1,"patchTotal":null},"messages":[{"id":"91457","messageId":"1222249887-11793-1-git-send-email-gdolley@ucla.edu","threadId":"15648","inReplyTo":null,"subject":"[PATCH] Fixed some grammatical errors in git-rebase.txt documentation.","fromName":"Garry Dolley","fromEmail":"gdolley@ucla.edu","sentAt":"2008-09-24T09:51:27Z","receivedAt":"2008-09-24T09:51:27Z","isPatch":true,"sender":{"key":"gdolley@ucla.edu","avatar":"https://gravatar.com/avatar/b9ca98e2d5fd3a993ad695e8315f078b7ae364d2d1b637a6adecf8953a034dd2?d=mp&s=160"},"body":"Generally, the dependent clause \"for example\" is suffixed with a comma.\nUsed present tense where appropriate to be consistent with the other\nparagraphs.\n\nRewrote the paragraph in the second hunk to be more clear.\n\nSigned-off-by: Garry Dolley <gdolley@ucla.edu>\n---\n Documentation/git-rebase.txt |    8 ++++----\n 1 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)\n\ndiff --git a/Documentation/git-rebase.txt b/Documentation/git-rebase.txt\nindex 59c1b02..32f0f12 100644\n--- a/Documentation/git-rebase.txt\n+++ b/Documentation/git-rebase.txt\n@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ branch to another, to pretend that you forked the topic branch\n from the latter branch, using `rebase --onto`.\n \n First let's assume your 'topic' is based on branch 'next'.\n-For example feature developed in 'topic' depends on some\n+For example, a feature developed in 'topic' depends on some\n functionality which is found in 'next'.\n \n ------------\n@@ -103,9 +103,9 @@ functionality which is found in 'next'.\n                             o---o---o  topic\n ------------\n \n-We would want to make 'topic' forked from branch 'master',\n-for example because the functionality 'topic' branch depend on\n-got merged into more stable 'master' branch, like this:\n+We want to make 'topic' forked from branch 'master'; for example,\n+because the functionality on which 'topic' depends was merged into the\n+more stable 'master' branch. We want our tree to look like this:\n \n ------------\n     o---o---o---o---o  master\n-- \n1.6.0.1\n"}]}